"2 bits of feedback so far...
unless really necessary to improving the story i would cut down on the swearing.
also it went on too long and i think it would be hard for anyone apart from the avid fan to last.
it was good though but i thought u were much better than guido. which is fine if ur going to do it as a funny guy/straight guy combination. i doubt you were thinking this though.
i would also have parts of it scripted and would have a gag reel to be used (having the gags in front of you but making it sound improvised on podcast)"