"That's very fucking good, actually. Seriously.

Cupla thoughts
1. Libel. Yadda yadda care taken etc etc. Very funny line about Hughes' friend Dorothy, but.... hmmm. Wouldn't get away with it here. This is yr big problem.
2. Length. 5 mins would almost certainly be better. It's all good stuff, but that's just way too long. Regular 5 mins bursts could be quite viral around the web, and they'd be easy to email etc. Cult following very quickly, I'd have thought.
3. Subject matter - very easy at the moment - lots going on. Could you bluster through with as many gags without a leadership contest?

Either way, first class. Launch this as podcasts and, within 6 months at most you'll have a regular late night slot on radio. Have no doubt at all".